Talk:Genital modification and mutilation

Dubious wording viewpoints.

It seems WP:POV to say “opposition is often centered on the mistaken proposition that the procedure violates human rights.” How is a viewpoint (which is largely subjective) “mistaken”? This weasel wording seems to go against the RfC. Prcc27 (talk) 19:29, 18 August 2024 (UTC)

You picked the source and WP:V is policy. That's it's analysis. Is there a counter-analysis from an equally weighted source? The (poor) RfC was not (and cannot be) a license to ignore policy, right? By trying to suppress/downplay this well-sourced content you are directly violating the RfC outcome in any case. Bon courage (talk) 19:49, 18 August 2024 (UTC)

We should not be stating opinions as fact per WP:ASSERT. A viewpoint being “mistaken” is an opinion. “Concomitant with a need to respect human rights” is an opinion. You should not be using weasel words in wikivoice. If you disagree with the outcome of the RfC, I am open to re-opening it, and pinging everyone that participated so far to see whaat they think. But no, you do not get to unilaterally overturn an RfC. Prcc27 (talk) 20:00, 18 August 2024 (UTC)

That's an essay, WP:ASSERT. The policy is in WP:YESPOV. Unless there's some serious doubt about this (in quality RS) we are required to state as fact the knowledge in the sources without fuss. Bon courage (talk) 20:11, 18 August 2024 (UTC)

I respectfully disagree that we have to state opinions of a source as fact. If the source in question is POV, I am sure we could find a more neutral source. In any case, I asked the person that closed the RfC if they are willing to reopen the RfC. Prcc27 (talk) 20:28, 18 August 2024 (UTC)

Follow WP:YESPOV. To quote:

Uncontested and uncontroversial factual assertions made by reliable sources should normally be directly stated in Wikipedia's voice, for example the sky is blue not [name of source] believes the sky is blue. Unless a topic specifically deals with a disagreement over otherwise uncontested information, there is no need for specific attribution for the assertion, although it is helpful to add a reference link to the source in support of verifiability.

I see no sourcing making this "controversial". This material does not "overturn the RfC" – that's just a canard. In fact it was you who added the source with unverified text which it did not support, and we are now trying to adjust to text which actually is supported by the source. Prcc27 (talk) 20:28, 18 August 2024 (UTC) Bon courage (talk) 20:36, 18 August 2024 (UTC)

There are plenty of articles on the ethics of circumcision.[1] Whether or not circumcision is a human rights violation is a contested viewpoint. Since when is “circumcision is not a human right’s violation” an “uncontested assertion?” The source itself even concedes there is a disagreement on the issue. Prcc27 (talk) 20:54, 18 August 2024 (UTC)

It would need to be contested in RS. Many points are "contested" (the age of the earth, aliens are here, prayer cures cancer) in misconceived ways. Wikipedia doesn't indulge that. We have the sourcing we have. The point of this source is to correct a misconception. (By this way I notice this recent review (pmid:38405642) states that the anti-human rights arguments rely on distorting medical evidence. This may be useful added knowledge.) Bon courage (talk) 20:59, 18 August 2024 (UTC)

It is contested in RS, including in viewpoints of major medical organizations. The Royal Dutch Medical Association views circumcision as a violation of children’s rights. Prcc27 (talk) 21:07, 18 August 2024 (UTC)

I don't suppose they have any jurisdiction outside Holland, but in any case this would be an example of the mistaken views embodied in "local norms". If we're going to cite material about "human rights" at large, we need sources that do that. Bon courage (talk) 21:15, 18 August 2024 (UTC)

As far as medical ethics go, I would say Brian Earp is reliable enough. Otherwise, I’d say remove the entire paragraph altogether. It is wording you came up with unilaterally, and better to have nothing at all than weasel garbage. Prcc27 (talk) 21:23, 18 August 2024 (UTC)

Isn't he an activist? You picked the source here. On further consideration this RfC close is bad in any case; this is an overview article and not the place to cram in new material. Bon courage (talk) 21:25, 18 August 2024 (UTC)

A views on genital modification page has been created. I do not believe that the article should focus on every culture's viewpoint. @Bon courage:. It is also odd that editors want to insert (their personal opinion?) into the article. The claim that FGM won't be abolished unless circumcision is legally prohibited in Western states is dubious at best. It is not held by major institutions. DerApfelZeit (talk) 19:51, 10 November 2024 (UTC)

Beyond this, I believe you are correct. "The Brussels Collaboration on Bodily Integrity" appears to be a self-promotional attempt by an editor with a stated conflict-of-interest about the paper. I'm not sure why we'd include the opinions of anyone in the first place into the article without exceptional reason. I agreed with your revert. DerApfelZeit (talk) 19:54, 10 November 2024 (UTC)

Sync

Okay, I've attempted to solve the issue by excerpting from the 3 detail articles to bring us into WP:SYNC. If people want to alter the wording they can do so at the pointed-to detail articles, so long as the relevant WP:PAGs are observed, of course. Bon courage (talk) 07:58, 19 August 2024 (UTC)

@Bon courage: I have reverted it. Your synced version removed the explanation of the foreskin, the percentages of why the procedure is done, that complications from circumcision are rare, and most importantly deleted that circumcision is done in areas with a high-risk of HIV as part of prevention. None of those were objected to as far as I can tell, but especially not the HIV prevention part. --Super Goku V (talk) 03:46, 20 August 2024 (UTC)

Wouldn't the thing to do to be to edit the main articles (or the excerpt parameters) so that the content was summarized here and WP:SYNC respected? Do you think pulling an extra paragraph from Circumcision could cover it, for example? Bon courage (talk) 03:49, 20 August 2024 (UTC)

You are more familiar with this article and related ones along with SYNC, so I believe you have reasonable answers to those questions. My objections are listed above: The removal of content that was not objected to and that there seems to be no issue with along with the removal of content that is from a global prospective. If you can find a way to SYNC it without removing what existed here, then that would resolve my objections above. --Super Goku V (talk) 09:35, 20 August 2024 (UTC)

Detailed cultural views shouldn't be mentioned

The context of the RFC is widely different from the present.

As you can see above, the RFC merely concluded that some mention of viewpoints should be included in the article(s). That has been provided by a newly created topic article and a specific one for it. Would be strange to focus just on circumcision when gender-affirming healthcare and FGM has far more notoriety in popular culture and academic scholarship. @Prcc27:. @Bon courage:.

Your edit turns the article into a coat stand of random, unconnected opinions. DerApfelZeit (talk) 20:29, 10 November 2024 (UTC)

This paragraph in the article also does the same thing without an undue emphasis on a particular subject:

Contrasting views have sometimes crossed into the realm of politics and law, where matters of sexual reassignment surgery, other forms of gender-affirming healthcare, circumcision, and intersex medical interventions have often become the subject of legal and social debate. Modern Western cultures often place a greater emphasis on individualist notions of consent and autonomy over ideas of communitarian obligations, natural law, or divine commandments, which tend to have more influence in non-Western societies.

What medical organizations state that circumcision has benefits? It's not in the citations. DerApfelZeit (talk) 20:48, 10 November 2024 (UTC)

I'm also wondering what group of mainstream doctors or medical organization states that circumcision improves sexual function.

Couldn't find a single word online. You'd be laughed at in Germany if you made that claim. DerApfelZeit (talk) 20:54, 10 November 2024 (UTC)

More neutral wording

The following discussion is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.

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The article has significant flaws and is heavily biased. I propose that it should be rewritten and look something like this.

Here are some of the major issues I've noticed:

• The article's title asserts that every genital modification is mutilation. This is deeply offensive.

• The article is trying to actively persuade the reader to hold a left-wing, autonomy-based viewpoint of ethics.

• Catholicism — which has 1.5 billion followers — holds that natural law and divine commandment takes precedence over "consent" or "autonomy". The perspective that the article wants you to affirm (that any consensual action by a sufficiently autonomous actor is permissible; any action that is not is wrong) is a minority global perspective. Yet it is at the moment the only one given.

• Labiaplasty on girls/women, healthcare and related-surgeries for transgender individuals have received far more significant attention than circumcision, even in Germany, where I live, yet vast swathes of the article (almost 1/4th of the article) is focused on the opinions of an anti-circumcision group called the Brussels Collaboration on Bodily Integrity.

• The article implies that circumcised men have sexually damaged sex lives. No mainstream source, to my recollection, states this.

• The article also claims that circumcision may "confer sexual benefits". I know of no mainstream doctor that claims this.

I'm also not sure why this page pushes the idea that every modification is mutilation. Some things in the article might be mutilation. It's offense to label piercings and tattoos "mutilation". It's emotional language that I haven't seen anyone else on Wikipedia.

Willing to help improve the page if anyone is interested. DerApfelZeit (talk) 01:01, 11 November 2024 (UTC)

No. This article does not insinuate that all genital modifications are mutilation. We have already discussed this at least twice and the consensus was to keep the title as is. Does the article say circumcised men have damaged sex lives, or does it say that that is a viewpoint that some have? We do not say that in wikivoice AFAIK. I do not believe the article should claim circumcision has “sexual benefits”, sounds dubious. Prcc27 (talk) 02:18, 11 November 2024 (UTC)

This section (added a month ago by Chrono1984) in wikivoice gives disproportionate airspace to the idea that all genital modifications performed with the consent of a sufficiently autonomous individual are not mutilation. That's a minority viewpoint globally. Sikhs, most Muslims, the Catholic Church, Evangelicals, Orthodox Jews, and many secular individuals in Eastern Europe/Asia don't believe this.

• Sikhs see consensual genital modifications (including trimming the pubes or cutting hair in general) as ethically questionable.
• Catholics, conservative evangelical Protestants, most Muslims, and many secular individuals in East Asia/Europe see consensual transgender surgeries/healthcare as ethically wrong, regardless of whether it is performed on a consenting adult.
• The large majority of Jews and Muslims see certain (arguably non-consensual) actions like routine circumcision as not mutilation. I would say that most in Canada, the United States, and East Asia, as well as many in Europe, hold this view either.

I didn't find the arguments in the RFC persuasive and other editors have made identical statements to what I'm writing now. A RFC that is closed 7-7-1 is by no means a consensus. As for the sentence I'm referring to, it makes the following claims:

Modern proponents say that circumcision reduces the risks of a range of infections and diseases and confers sexual benefits. Opponents, particularly of routine neonatal circumcision, question its preventive efficacy and object to subjecting non-consenting newborn males to a procedure that is potentially harmful, in their view, with little to no benefit, as well as violating their human rights and possibly negatively impacting their sex life

What doctor or medical organization states that it "negatively impacts" an individual's sex life? What medical organization claims it has "sexual benefits"? Both claims appear to be cherry-picked in regards to the science. The large majority say it doesn't make an impact at all.

Any mention of "sexual benefits" or "possibly negatively impacting their sex life" should be expunged. Mostly interested on adding my knowledge of Deus Ex lore on here... so this is probably going to have to be someone else's problem if there's going to be a huge debate on it. It's just one of the worst, and most biased, Wikipedia articles I've seen on here. I propose something like this instead:

Contrasting views have sometimes crossed into the realm of politics and law, where matters of sexual reassignment surgery, other forms of gender-affirming healthcare, circumcision, and intersex medical interventions have often become the subject of legal and social debate. Modern Western cultures often place a greater emphasis on individualist notions of consent and autonomy over ideas of communitarian obligations, natural law, or divine commandments common in non-Western societies.

The article also makes claims in perhaps the most subjective matter possible (ethics) and quotes long opinions about it:

therefore, that as a matter of justice, inclusivity, and gender equality in medical-ethical policy (we do not take a position as to criminal law), clinicians should not be permitted to perform any nonvoluntary genital cutting or surgery in prepubescent minors, irrespective of the latter’s sex traits or gender assignment, unless urgently necessary to protect their physical health

Despite the article mentioning this elsewhere. I've never heard of the "Brussels collaboration on Bodily integrity" (which appears to be a project that the editor is involved in) but it appears to be a group that is focused on prohibiting neonatal circumcision. It's definitely been the subject of some analysis in recent years but could be quickly summarized. The entire article comes across as an argumentative essay wanting people to take a left-wing, autonomy-based ethical view on genital modification. DerApfelZeit (talk) 03:16, 11 November 2024 (UTC)

And you think third time’s a charm? It is disruptive to rehash something that has already failed in a matter of a few months ago. Prcc27 (talk) 03:23, 11 November 2024 (UTC)

1.) Not at the moment. I may submit a move request in a few months.

2.) Do you agree with everything else? DerApfelZeit (talk) 03:28, 11 November 2024 (UTC)

The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.